final draft

When
we were walking in the mall I was thinking about going home. We were
almost out the door when we ran into the Fosters which are people
that we know And I was thinking “oh great” I thought
“just someone one to slow us down.” Then they started
talking and I was thinking why now do we have to run into the
Fosters? So I said to myself “I'll make a evil plane to force
us leave.” I ran around and got my dad to look at me. Then my
plan went horribly wrong.

I was on the ground bleeding
with blood in my chin. My dad came running to me. I was thinking,
“what happened? I was running around then I fell.” I felt
my chin, there was a a hole there I could fit my fingers in. I was
scared. I wondered what was going to happen to me. My dad said “what
happened?” My mom asked the same thing. I realized We went
through Sears. In there people stopped us and gave us paper towels.
Then we went to the car and went to the hospital. My dad drove while
my mom sat in the back with the paper towels on my chin.

When we got to the hospital
checked about getting the doctor. He would be able to see me in a few
minutes. The people behind the desk asked me some questions like how
old was I, so I told them I was 6 years old. In the meantime they put
a pad on my chin and taped it on. My dad took me to the bathroom he
took off the pad because he wanted me to see what it looked like and
I looked in the mirror. There was a bone sticking out. I was grossed
out at first, but then it was cool apart from the cut and bleeding
and the pain.

The doctor took 1 hour, not a few
minutes. When the doctor took me to the room we had to walk down the
hall and make a left into the room. While we were in the room I
didn't know what they were going to do to me. I was so scared what
would happen. When the doctor was about to put the stitches in he
asked “do you want something to cover your face?” I said
“yes.” The doctor got a cloth and covered up my face. The
cloth was warm. The smell of puke was in the air because the person
before me was sick. Then the doctor started in. The stitches were
cold. He put the stitches in one after another. Each one pinched. I
felt the cold stitches in my chin and also could feel the doctor's
latex gloves in my chin. The doctor finished the inside with the bone
and started the outside. The outside was more painful than the
inside. When they removed the cloth everything was blurry and the
doctor said it was over.