Matthew Hartin BPW

Matt's game zone





I'm am the owner of the business called Matt's game zone I'm Matt. We have a supply of video games and game systems. The items we sell are goods. Our price is high enough to make a profit. We have plentiful games here so no rush to come down. There are a few titles that are scarce. We may be able to offer alternatives. We have incentives if you pay $120.00 or more you get one free. There is no competition thats how good we are. We are a monopoly business. Well we have have the best service in the town or the city. The demand for our products is low. All of our resources are nonrenewable. Our producers are Wal-mart they gave us our first prototype. All are items are wants. We also provide a service we teach people how to play video games and repair games and systems. We have a surplus of games. Our business is on a budget. At this time we only accept American currency. You better come because remember, we know where you live.                  

Vocabulary  -0.7
1. Supply	2. Price	3. Profit	4. Plentiful	5. Incentives
6. Competition	7. Service	8. Demand	9. Resource	10. Producers
11. Prototype	12. Wants	13.	14.	15.
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Spelling -0.2	Capitalization -0.2	Punctuation
No observable errors	No observable errors	X  No observable errors
X Less than 5 errors	X  Less than 5 errors	Less than 5 errors
5 or more errors	5 or more errors	5 or more errors

Website	-0.1
X  Supports business	Colorful	X   Creative	X    Neat

Final Score 2.8